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To really rehabilitate we will need to start from scratch I will be erasing everything to do with our old storyline and creating another with help of a few of our more experienced members so be prepared, if you wish to change your character bio drastically please post and inform us here with your choice if not the tell us here but we will be officially starting again as soon as I'm finished with the renovations.

PS: Remember to check the News and updates Thread for the edited storyline it will be in the place of the old one.

My character will stay pretty much the same though he will come out of his millenia old hibernation with a much different outlook on life. The Bio will be revised, I assure you.

I am going to make drastic changes to my character. And I am wondering if "Sith" can be taken out of my title. And I am also hoping that my name can be changed from Teleq, to Luka.

I will post my newly updated bio here, so yea.

Glad to see the site is going to be cleaned. And i hope since it gets clean, then anything that begins to dirty it up again will be taken care of as soon as possible.



Name- Luka

Age- 16

Gender- Female

Species- Miraluka

Homeworld- Thule

Weapons- Single orange blade, slightly curved hilt, 30 inches.

Physical Features- Bright red-orange hair, curvy body, pale skin.

Eyes- All white, thin leather strip of mask

Height- 5' 5"

Weight- 110

Clothing- Cortosis breast plate and cortosis waist plate

Distinctions- Luka takes off her mask to give her victims a look at her eyes before they die a painful death. She also uses her looks to manipulate other's decisions, mainly men, and uses the force to help them bring out their thoughts.

BACKGROUND INFO

Luka was born from Miralukese parents. Her father was of the sith, and her mother a follower. In her youth, she would see her father beat her mother every night, when she did something not up to his standards. Luka's mother would be forced to do things unfavorable, and immoral. A hate grew inside of Luka, and though she was small, it was a very big power. She planned in the night, the perfect plan to kill her father and run away with her mother. She stayed up in the night, creating her own personal lightsaber and keeping strength by meditation. A great feat for a mere 12 year old girl. Her finished lightsaber had a bright orange blade, beautiful, just like her. When her plan, and lightsaber were completed, she took her plan into action. After a night of watching her mother take beatings, and pushed onto the ground and stepped upon, she waited until her father fell asleep. He slept hard, and a snore gargled in his throat with each breath. The little 12 year old Luka grabbed her newly made lightsaber and entered her parent's room. She hovered gracefully over her father, his snoring increased. She raised her hand and clenched her fingers into a fist. Simultaneously, her father jolted upright out of his sleep, his eyes wide with fear, as he grasped at his throat, trying to stop the choking. Luka, slowly, but fiercely removed the leather strip from her eyes, to show before igniting her bright orange lightsaber and executing her father, in one swift movement.

ESCAPE

Luka was young, but very bright. She packed her and her mother's bags before killing her father. Her mother seemed helpless. She walked slowly behind her and sobbed silently. Though she hated Luka's father, she couldn't help but feel it when her daughter had killed him. Luka had fallen to the darkside, and at a young age. Her father's credit stash kept them on a decent supply for the next 2 years. Her mother had hardened, and she was a fierce woman. Wandering Thule was a decent ride. Authorities found Luka's father decapitated at home after he missed a few days of work. They were looking for Luka and her mother. They stayed in pub's near their home, and moved farther away each day. The authorities caught their trail when a few natives had seen them in the local pub. Luka and her mother ran, fleeing on foot to the nearest space station. They hijacked a small hovercraft and fled. A ship from above saw the attack, and lowered in on them, ejecting two men with blaster rifles from the bottom. The men had the force on their side and they shot with precise aim. Luka being strong in the force was able to maneuver the ship and evade many shots, but a multiple of lasers were headed in their direction. The ship made its way into the range of fire and Luka's mother was hit in the side. She screamed and Luka faulted. Two more shots were fired and Luka immediately ignited her lightsaber and deflected the shots. One went back and hit a man in the chest. Dropping him on the spot. The other man stopped, and Luka drove on, with no tears in her eyes, as her anger drove her. When dusk approached, Luka stopped her hovercraft and buried her mother, lifting the sandy dirt and making a pit. At the age of 14, Luka was all alone, and starting to grow poor. Though her father's credits had lasted a very long time. She became angrier, and fiercer, forcing people to do things for her. And any time she came across someone who went against what she said, she killed them. She flew to another nearby space station, and forced two pilots to fly her to Korriban. The space ride was short, and the now 16 year old Luka, was ready to enter the Dark Side's throne of warriors. The space ship landed on the dusty sandy foot of Korriban's land, and she killed the pilots. She took her first step off of the ship and started her new journey on the Dark Side.


Hope this is credible. Thanks you guys for keeping up with the site, and then taking the time to clean it up. I appreciate it a lot.

If/When I get Kuaky's password sent to me, he will be staying pretty much the same. As for the restart of the story line, can we please keep our titles (I.E. Renowned Traitor). I find it a significance in what I am going to do. Glad to see that not all have abandoned hope!

Some of us never left Ronnoc. Personally I'm working on my bio right now. It'll virtually stay the same, and a word FROM the wise Teleq, I wouldn't use any significant names from the Kotor series, just as a heads up.

haha ok, but i really have no knowledge of the kotor series, so i don't have any idea who or what name you are talking about.

if your talking about the name Mira, then that was just me taking the name out of the species.

Mira's a rogue in KOTOR 2 who's later trained by the Exile to be a Jedi Sentinel.

Ok, I'll leave it to Dorian or Malice, if it seems like a problem then I will change the name without a complaint. If not then it seems like a pretty convenient name being the species of her character.

=] thanks for the heads up though Deltha.

"YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO BE MAJOR CHARACTERS FROM THE KOTOR SERIES. PERIOD. AND NO QUESTIONS ASKED."

Sorry but thats from the rules, so Deltha is right you should change your name. Thanks

Just thought I'd help you out before it slipped by without anyone noticing, don't want you to get into any trouble...But it seems Malice has already taken care of that.